(Craft) The Second Fiction Box: The Response

In last week’s post on the craft of fiction-writing, we discussed the First Box of writing fiction:  The Setup. Today we will be discussing the Second Box of Fiction Writing: the Response.

In the Setup,, we did just that. We set up our protagonist and antagonist.  We set up our protagonist’s goal and the stakes that compel her to reach that goal.  We introduced the First Plot Point where the protagonist’s world is turned upside down and the story really begins.

In Box Two, we present our protagonist’s response to his new upside-down situation and the tremendous conflict it has caused in his life.   In this box, the protagonist does not yet attack the problem.  He is in too much of a bewildered state to figure out exactly what to do.  He has been blindsided by the sudden turn of events in his life and is left reeling. 

Larry Brooks calls this box the “wandering” stage in which the protagonists waivers between two or more courses of action. At the same time, the protagonist has a purpose; he is simply trying to figure out the best way to fulfill it.

Fiction Box Two, then, is all about reaction or response.  Box Two could also be called the “regrouping” box.  In it, you will put all those elements that show your hero “regrouping” after his world has turned upside down.  He has not yet figured out what to do.  He is simply sorting out his thoughts and feelings.

Next week, we will take a look at Fiction Box Three: The Attack.


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